- Introduced our team to the audience
- Maybe choose an app that would appeal to teenage audiences more.
- Put more detail on the PowerPoint.
- Maybe put more pictures on the PowerPoint or short clips of video.
- And finally not read of a script.
looking at the video of our groups pitch, i picked up on all the things above which could have been done and fully understood. one other thing which could have been done by myself was to speak more fluently, as i did stop reading out the text one or two times. i believe after evaluating my pitch and idea fully now and if i done the changes that were necessary, and other little extra things that could have been done, our group would of had a winning pitch.
